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How To Write Hymns

Here's an article I wrote recently for the BBC hymnwriting competition.

There are probably more hymns and worship songs being written today than in any period of church history. But relatively few will stand the test of time. And that has always been the case: for every “Amazing grace” or “And can it be”, you can bet there are several hundred trite, interminably dull ditties that did the rounds at the time, but have now thankfully faded into blissful obscurity.

So how can we make sure what we write is worth singing for years to come? Here are a few ideas that I try to put into practice myself:

1. Study the Scriptures. The best hymns demonstrate insight and understanding of the Bible, and consequently bring the truths of the Christian faith to life. If you don’t know the message of the gospel, you can’t write something that will enable others to worship in spirit and truth.

2. Be poetic, not pompous. Sometimes when people set out to write a hymn, they use phrases which might sound 'hymny’, but actually mean very little. Make your phrases mean something!

3. Combine objective truth and subjective response. When a hymn is just a statement of theological truth, it may be accurate, but it can be dry. Equally, when a hymn is just about how we feel, it’s wishy washy. The best hymns powerfully express the emotions of the worshipper, but as an emotional response to the objective truth of the gospel.

4. Look for musical dynamics. A hymn should have musical peaks and troughs, and there should be a sense of building to a climax where the melody soars while expressing the main theme of the hymn.

5. Make every line count. I see hymns that contain a few good ideas, but some of the lines are clearly there as just ‘filler’, and let the whole thing down. Don’t just stick in a line because it rhymes, or because you couldn’t think of anything else to say.

6. Prune it mercilessly. Once you think you’ve finished, go through it carefully, and get rid of anything that distracts from the main theme you’re expressing. Better to have two compact, punchy verses than four rambling, unfocused ones.

So get writing!

Stuart

Comments
David  - thank you   |12-05-2009 17:30:52
Thank you for sharing a brief and detailed way to write a hymn. I'm working on one and I believe I'm on the right track, just need a some adjustments and I should be fine. Well thanks be to God who revealed His glorious Son to us one day. May the Lord bless you and His love constrain you much more, Take care. ~David
Max Ramsay  - Think again!   |20-10-2009 17:14:29
I encountered your hymn 'In Christ alone my hope is found' at a recent service in Chester Cathedral. I sang it with enjoyment and enthusiasm until I encountered lines 5 & 6 of verse 2: 'till on the cross as Jesus died the wrath of God was satisfied'.
The thinking behind this reflects a very strange understanding both of God and of the atonement. If as a Christian you believe in God as an indivisible Trinity, how can you portray God on the cross as satisfying his own wrath? True this kind of imagery was at some time current in some of the more extreme regions of the Church's thinking, but even Old Testament writers like Hosea had a better idea of God than the one you're perpetrating. May I respectfully suggest that you look again at that verse and revise it for all subsequent publications of the hymn. In its present form it offers a dangerously wrong picture of God - a picture that can do, and has in the past done, much harm.
Yours in Christ,
Max.
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